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DZ-121: Escalating Antagonism in SINNERS

How do the antagonistic forces in your story escalate distinctly from the protagonists’ journey?

⏱ 1h 24m
Structure · Character · Genre | 29 AUG 2025

Show Notes

We often struggle to develop the middle stages of a story. Could this be because we focus on our protagonists’ journeys and plot structure more than on how the antagonistic powers are awakened, wronged, discovered, gathering strength and revealing themselves?

In this episode, Chas and Stu are joined by professional screenwriter and playwright Kim Ho to explore how a generative story cycle (from tabletop role-playing game MOTHERSHIP) can be used to develop stories, not just write them better. This cycle is TOMBS: Transgression – Omens – Manifestation – Banishment – Slumber. Kim also contrasts this cycle with the Onset, Discovery, Confirmation, Confrontation cycle identified by horror philosopher Noel Carroll, as well as the philosophy of the FINAL DESTINATION franchise as analysed by The Morbid Zoo.

By applying the TOMBS cycle to Ryan Coogler’s amazing 2025 original feature SINNERS, we discover how focusing on the rising power of the various sources of antagonism can generate narrative fuel (and make your second Act sing); force your protagonists to Survive, Solve or Save (pick one); and how this escalation in antagonism can be mapped quite separately from your protagonists’ character arcs.

To prove that TOMBS does not just work for horror stories, we polled our patreons for which other genres to explore. Stay turned for the next episode (DZ-122) where we apply the TOMBS cycle to thriller REBEL RIDGE and comedy classic MEET THE PARENTS.

"what screenwriters do, even though we’ve got a finished product, when we’re in the kind of development stages of a story, we are looking to systems to help us, right? Whether it’s Save the Cat or the hero’s journey to use the most well-known models, but even the five, you know, the six sequence for each of the act, whatever structural tools that we’re talking about, we’re looking at systems to help us generate ideas."

Stu Willis  |  DZ-121: Escalating Antagonism in SINNERS

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As always: SPOILERS ABOUND and all copyright material used under fair use for educational purposes.


Chapters

  • 00:00:00 – Cold open
  • 00:00:18 – What is T.O.M.B.S?
  • 00:31:04 – SINNERS
  • 01:17:51 – Key Learnings & Wrap Up
  • 01:23:51 – Thank you patreons!

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