DZ-116: Writing Physical Comedy

Transcript

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Chapters

• 00:00:00 – Cold Open
• 00:00:19 – Writing Physical Comedy: Scope, Constraints, and Homework Selection
• 00:03:55 – › Defining screwball, farce, and slapstick as distinct forms
• 00:06:52 – › How three case studies represent different slapstick approaches
• 00:10:27 – BRINGING UP BABY
• 00:15:04 – › Slug lines as editing rhythm and geography
• 00:18:15 – › Repetition in action lines mirrors physical comedy beats
• 00:22:31 – › Camera direction versus character eyeline to frame visual gags
• 00:28:20 – › Script-to-screen reordering of physical comedy sequences
• 00:31:44 – Thank you, Arc Studio Pro!
• 00:34:34 – HAPPY ENDINGS PILOT
• 00:38:53 – › How tone is established through action lines and formatting
• 00:44:09 – › Setting up running gags early to fuel later physical beats
• 00:54:59 – › Directing the camera on the page to control comedic framing
• 00:58:15 – BRIDESMAIDS
• 01:02:11 – › Framing the BRIDESMAIDS food poisoning scene setup
• 01:08:00 – › How action lines build and escalate physical comedy on the page
• 01:20:03 – › When setup earns dialogue-only visual comedy
• 01:27:31 – Key learnings
• 01:33:56 – Thank you amazing Patreons!

Films

• BRIDESMAIDS (2011) — (w) Annie Mumolo, Kristen Wiig (d) Paul Feig
• BRINGING UP BABY (1938) — (w) Dudley Nichols, Hagar Wilde, Hagar Wilde (d) Howard Hawks
• GAME NIGHT (2018) — (w) Mark Perez (d) John Francis Daley, Jonathan Goldstein

Shows

• HAPPY ENDINGS 1x1 "Pilot" — (w) David Caspe (d) Anthony Russo, Joe Russo

Scripts

• Study the script: BRIDESMAIDS (2011) — Annie Mumolo, Kristen Wiig
• Study the script: BRINGING UP BABY (1938) — Dudley Nichols, Hagar Wilde, Hagar Wilde
• Study the script: GAME NIGHT (2018) — Mark Perez
• Study the script: HAPPY ENDINGS 1x1 "Pilot" — David Caspe

Shot Zero Deep Dives

• ↗Small and Large Physical Comedy: BRINGING UP BABY
• ↗The Game of the Scene - GAME NIGHT
• ▶How is this oner from GAME NIGHT so seamless?

Related Episodes

• DZ-16: Masters of Time and Whitespace

Using Repetition to Visualize Humor

"The words on the page and the repetition are mimicking the edit, so we can visualize the humor and the repetition of it."

— Chas Fisher (00:19:03) · Whitespace · Physical Comedy

Evoking Imagery Through Script

"As a director, when I read a script, I want to be seeing it in my head, you know? Something that doesn't evoke some sort of imagery in your head is probably not that interesting."

— Chas Fisher (01:32:47) · Visual Language · Craft Tools

Screwball vs. Slapstick: Language, Plot, and Physicality

"Screwball is something that has language, plot and physicality. Slapstick is physicality. And it may involve language. It may not. It may be entirely silent."

— Mel Killingsworth (00:04:16) · Physical Comedy · Genre Conventions

Dialogue Over Big Print

"Having characters talking about what's happening is the funnier option than doing it in big print."

— Chas Fisher (01:05:06) · Dialogue · Big Print

Setting Up Gags for the Reader

"They've taken the time up front in the scene to set up the geography and the layout of the room and two running gags so the baby voice running gag but that's a performance one, but they've set it up for the reader."

— Chas Fisher (00:50:22) · Setups Payoffs · Writing for Actors

Slug Lines Drive Pacing Through Structure

"the slug lines mimic the editing and how quickly this is all happening. And it really drives the pacing because yeah, it's just action lines so far, but it's not, there's quite a lot of white space on the page because you're going back and forth between what's happening in each location quite quickly."

— Mel Killingsworth (00:16:59) · Scene Structure