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Stephen Cleary

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2020

DZ-73: Selling documents - Development Tools 3
How do I write selling documents differently to development documents?
DZ-73: Selling documents - Development Tools 3
⏱ 39m
|21 Oct 2020
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In developing our stories and scripts, we have probably written some combination of treatments and loglines and outlines. Some of us have probably even sent these development materials out to producers or agencies when “selling” a project — as a step towards getting someone to read or gulp produce your material. If so… have you written them differently? Should you have? You probably should have&hellip…
DZ-72: Theme & The Story Synopsis - Development Tools 2
How can I develop my theme without writing script pages?
DZ-72: Theme & The Story Synopsis - Development Tools 2
⏱ 1h 0m
|28 Sep 2020
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Continuing our look at tools used in development, Chas & Stu are joined by Stephen Cleary to talk about Theme, The Thematic Logline and what Stephen calls The Story Synopsis. All are tools to help writers better understand their theme and how it is dramatised. We use the classic film WITNESS as an example, so spoilers abound…

DZ-71: Treatments & Loglines - Development Tools 1
How can I develop my plot before writing the screenplay?
DZ-71: Treatments & Loglines - Development Tools 1
⏱ 1h 26m
|1 Sep 2020
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Stu and Chas are joined by fan-favourite, Stephen Cleary, to NOT look at what makes great screenplays work – but what makes great “short documents” work. We draw on Stephen Cleary’s wealth of experience in developing work with writers, as a producer, as a script editor and as a former head of development…
DZ-67: Writing Passive Protagonists & Melodrama
How do I tell a powerful story where the protagonist cannot drive the plot?
DZ-67: Writing Passive Protagonists & Melodrama
⏱ 2h 58m
|30 Apr 2020
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Stu and Chas are joined by Stephen Cleary following his exploration into Melodrama, and together they try to reclaim the word from its pejorative meaning…



2019

DZ-63: Tools for Better Dialogue (Part 2) - Hook and Eye
How can you create flow and contrast in your dialogue?
DZ-63: Tools for Better Dialogue (Part 2) - Hook and Eye
⏱ 1h 58m
|31 Dec 2019
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A full three years after the first instalment (and one of our most popular), Stu and Chas have kidnapped Stephen Cleary to once again develop some craft tools around dialogue. It would be fair to say that - in that time - all three have learnt a lot more about dialogue than they knew in 2016. It would be also fair to say that Stephen perhaps learnt a little more through his research into “genderlect”…


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2018

DZ-54: Thematic Sequences
How does removing character and plot question force your audience to engage with theme?
DZ-54: Thematic Sequences
⏱ 2h 49m
|10 Oct 2018
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Chas and Stu are joined, once again, by the inestimable Stephen Cleary. This episode is a spiritual sequel to our last episode with Stephen, the one on sequence structure. That episode explored how sequences could be broken into plot, character, and plot/character sequences…

2017

DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity
What gives your sequences their intensity?
DZ-43: Driving Sequences - Character and Plot Intensity
⏱ 3h 16m
|8 Jul 2017
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Chas and Stu are joined for the fourth time by the inestimable Stephen Cleary - this time to take a deep dive into sequences. A real deep dive. A 3+ hour deep dive…

2016

DZ-31: Tools for Better Dialogue
How does dialogue serve to reveal character?
DZ-31: Tools for Better Dialogue
⏱ 2h 5m
|10 Apr 2016
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Chas & Stu are joined once again by the renowned script developer and producer, Stephen Cleary. In the first part of our series on writing better dialogue (there will be more!), we take a close look at how dialogue serves character: individuating characters, revealing characterisation, shifting status, and much more…

2014

DZ-6: Key Scenes and Unlocking the Story
Can one scene be the key to unlocking the whole story?
DZ-06: Key Scenes and Unlocking the Story
Listen listen if you want to understand how a single key scene between protagonist and antagonist can unlock the entire structure of your story
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Can one scene be the key to unlocking the whole story…
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AIStephen's observation hinges on having your characters figured out first, meaning their motivations must be clear enough that they'll naturally reveal your story's architecture in a single scene.


DZ-4: Catharsis and the Post-Coital Cigarette
How does the end of certain films make your soul shudder?
DZ-04: Catharsis and the Post-Coital Cigarette
Listen if you want to make you endings great!
⏱ 1h 25m
|14 Apr 2014
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Stu and Chas are joined by their first guest – illustrious script developer and producer Stephen Cleary – to explore how certain films can trigger an outpouring of emotion from the audience. Turns out that Aristotle may have figured it out a few thousand years ago and called it Catharsis…